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For Bite Size Contest No112 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

Since I left home in Memphis, Tennessee, and landed on my face. I woke up in this place, and saw fishes swimming next to me.  I found firewater, never the sun. Is this any way to drown, in the soaking part of town? Goodbye, good luck, your loving son.

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Date: 5/17/2025 2:52:00 PM
David, excellent writing, very deep, blessings ~
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David Crandall
Date: 5/18/2025 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Constance!

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