Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

A Leisurely Walk

Awakening my zeal, smiles hazy morning
Taking leisurely walk in nature's daydream
Advancing slowly into dense fog's retreat
As sun's orange glow on the horizon rises.

Shining  dew refracts  in golden sunrise
Attracting rose blooms to admiring eyes
As buoyancy roams on butterfly wings
In perfumed ambiance breezy air brings.

Panoramic is ruby scene blowing in winds
Swaying tall trees on forest green hills
Floating sights gently on wavy blue waters
Rowing fluid emotions on cerulean dreams.

Humid air revolves uplifting misty clouds
Harboring dark, flashing thunderous sparks
Raining on our ardor primed for romance
Causing hesitation of sensuous thoughts.

But emergence of rosy sky invites us back
As spectrum of colors inscribes the skyline
Evoking desires in remnants of raindrops
Holding me spellbound, courting your heart.

June 22, 2019
Placed 1st: Strand select E contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George January 17, 2022 at 12:48 AM "As spectrum of colors inscribes the skyline Evoking desires in remnants of raindrops Holding me spellbound, courting your heart"...... I too remain spell bound looking at this great spectrum you have created !

Angela Crabtree November 21, 2020 at 3:33 PM You always seize the moment in your poetry, Vijay. A great write! :)

Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2020 at 2:21 PM A great win with a colorful walk. I love your line, "As sun's orange glow on the horizon rises." What a beautiful way to start a day off. Enjoy your weekend.......

Brenda Chiri February 6, 2020 at 3:54 PM Vijay seems we keep going back and forth with congrats and this time is no different! Wonderfully written! You seem to be having quite a few top wins of late!;)

Panagiota Romios July 27, 2019 at 3:38 PM You have a true soul of a poet, Vitay! And in touch with the beauty of the world around you. Thank you for being! Panagiota

Jennifer Proxenos June 25, 2019 at 9:02 AM Hi Vijay, Your ability to poetically paint a superb scene of nature's beauty always holds me spellbound - You leave me in awe after every poem that I read - every one a gem! Hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:33 AM You are so kind my friend..thank you Jennifer--much appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux June 24, 2019 at 8:47 AM I enjoyed this colourful piece. Thanks for your visit. Vijay Pandit June 24, 2019 at 7:03 PM Thank you Richard..appreciate your visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole June 23, 2019 at 10:20 PM Sounds like you are lingering in Love. Its touch, the beauty of every moment. Through your words colors caress the sky, the wind lifts you even higher. Never let such a moment pass you by. Embrace the Wonder of it All. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit June 24, 2019 at 7:03 PM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy..many thanks.

Nette Onclaud June 22, 2019 at 10:35 PM a stroll that brings magic to your words, vijay... your pen glows!...huggs Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:29 AM Glad to read your kind remarks..much appreciate..many thanks, Nette.

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2019 at 7:18 PM emotions with nature's colorful beauty all tied into one! Very nice, Vijay. Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:28 AM Thank you Andrea..glad to see your comments--much appreciate.

Eve Roper June 22, 2019 at 6:28 PM Great written verse, Vijay, stirs my emotions to look for that same imagery and feelings. Hugs Eve Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:28 AM You are so very kind my friend..much your visit and comments, Eve..many thanks.

Panagiota Romios June 22, 2019 at 3:12 PM Phenomenal imagery, Vitaj. Tnank you Panagiota Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:27 AM Thank you your visit and kind remarks, Panagiota..much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham June 22, 2019 at 1:46 PM Romantic with beautiful imagery Vijay. Well written. Tom. Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:26 AM Much appreciate Tom..thank you for the kind feedback.

Arturo Michael June 22, 2019 at 12:45 PM All in a walk...Fantastic... Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:26 AM Thank you Arturo..much appreciate.

Heidi Sands June 22, 2019 at 12:01 PM Wow! Such a beautiful walk and amazing poem. Love it :) Enjoy the day ! Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:25 AM Haven't seen much of you lately, Heidi..hoping all is well. Much appreciate..many thanks for the kind remarks, as always.

Janice Canerdy June 22, 2019 at 10:29 AM Such a beautiful, descriptive, appealing piece, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:24 AM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Maria Williams June 22, 2019 at 8:30 AM Vijay this is a wondrous journey through nature's walk you have taken us on. Every line capture the imagination, holds one spellbound in the imagery, finding it hard to leave this marvelous leisurely walk. Always a pleasure to read my dear friend. ....Maria Hugs Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:23 AM You are so very kind my friend..much appreciate your visit and generous remarks..many thanks, Maria.

Winged Warrior June 22, 2019 at 5:31 AM Great walking with you my friend...excellent verse and getting better all the time :)...happy trails...^WW^...{*J*} Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:21 AM Honored by your visit my friend..appreciate the comments..many thanks.