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A Leisurely Walk

Awakening my zeal, smiles hazy morning Taking leisurely walk in nature's daydream Advancing slowly into dense fog's retreat As sun's orange glow on the horizon rises. Shining dew refracts in golden sunrise Attracting rose blooms to admiring eyes As buoyancy roams on butterfly wings In perfumed ambiance breezy air brings. Panoramic is ruby scene blowing in winds Swaying tall trees on forest green hills Floating sights gently on wavy blue waters Rowing fluid emotions on cerulean dreams. Humid air revolves uplifting misty clouds Harboring dark, flashing thunderous sparks Raining on our ardor primed for romance Causing hesitation of sensuous thoughts. But emergence of rosy sky invites us back As spectrum of colors inscribes the skyline Evoking desires in remnants of raindrops Holding me spellbound, courting your heart. June 22, 2019 Placed 1st: Strand select E contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 1/17/2022 12:48:00 AM

"As spectrum of colors inscribes the skyline Evoking desires in remnants of raindrops Holding me spellbound, courting your heart"...... I too remain spell bound looking at this great spectrum you have created !

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/21/2020 3:33:00 PM

You always seize the moment in your poetry, Vijay. A great write! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/8/2020 2:21:00 PM

A great win with a colorful walk. I love your line, "As sun's orange glow on the horizon rises." What a beautiful way to start a day off. Enjoy your weekend.......

Brenda Chiri

Date: 2/6/2020 3:54:00 PM

Vijay seems we keep going back and forth with congrats and this time is no different! Wonderfully written! You seem to be having quite a few top wins of late!;)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/27/2019 3:38:00 PM

You have a true soul of a poet, Vitay! And in touch with the beauty of the world around you. Thank you for being! Panagiota

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/25/2019 9:02:00 AM

Hi Vijay, Your ability to poetically paint a superb scene of nature's beauty always holds me spellbound - You leave me in awe after every poem that I read - every one a gem! Hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2019 7:33:00 AM

You are so kind my friend..thank you Jennifer--much appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2019 8:47:00 AM

I enjoyed this colourful piece. Thanks for your visit.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/24/2019 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Richard..appreciate your visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/23/2019 10:20:00 PM

Sounds like you are lingering in Love. Its touch, the beauty of every moment. Through your words colors caress the sky, the wind lifts you even higher. Never let such a moment pass you by. Embrace the Wonder of it All. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/24/2019 7:03:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy..many thanks.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2019 10:35:00 PM

a stroll that brings magic to your words, vijay... your pen glows!...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:29:00 AM

Glad to read your kind remarks..much appreciate..many thanks, Nette.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2019 7:18:00 PM

emotions with nature's colorful beauty all tied into one! Very nice, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:28:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..glad to see your comments--much appreciate.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/22/2019 6:28:00 PM

Great written verse, Vijay, stirs my emotions to look for that same imagery and feelings. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:28:00 AM

You are so very kind my friend..much your visit and comments, Eve..many thanks.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/22/2019 3:12:00 PM

Phenomenal imagery, Vitaj. Tnank you Panagiota

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:27:00 AM

Thank you your visit and kind remarks, Panagiota..much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2019 1:46:00 PM

Romantic with beautiful imagery Vijay. Well written. Tom.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:26:00 AM

Much appreciate Tom..thank you for the kind feedback.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/22/2019 12:45:00 PM

All in a walk...Fantastic...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Arturo..much appreciate.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/22/2019 12:01:00 PM

Wow! Such a beautiful walk and amazing poem. Love it :) Enjoy the day !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:25:00 AM

Haven't seen much of you lately, Heidi..hoping all is well. Much appreciate..many thanks for the kind remarks, as always.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/22/2019 10:29:00 AM

Such a beautiful, descriptive, appealing piece, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:24:00 AM

Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/22/2019 8:30:00 AM

Vijay this is a wondrous journey through nature's walk you have taken us on. Every line capture the imagination, holds one spellbound in the imagery, finding it hard to leave this marvelous leisurely walk. Always a pleasure to read my dear friend. ....Maria Hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:23:00 AM

You are so very kind my friend..much appreciate your visit and generous remarks..many thanks, Maria.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/22/2019 5:31:00 AM

Great walking with you my friend...excellent verse and getting better all the time :)...happy trails...^WW^...{*J*}

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:21:00 AM

Honored by your visit my friend..appreciate the comments..many thanks.