A Legend Without a Map

her eyes have seen
   a thousand roads 
   each downwind of the other


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Connelly Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 5:18 AM
Definitely downwind Maureen so THEY don't know who is approaching. In Egypt they say, "Every road leads to a perfume shop." And sure enough. I was there so many years ago, met a guy, at night at the Great Pyramids, who was a guide; and since the French language light show was playing, and je parle pas Francais in pue, I went with this guy; bribed a guard to climb a pyramid; went inside one by flashlight, and ther things, BUT the final outcome was, "Now, please come to my uncle's perfume shop."
Radice Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 3:23 AM
Very good! Sounds like my Sat Nav that I've lost and can't find anywhere.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Giggles galore! Thankya Gary :))) xomo
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 3:21 PM
this is so profound!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Thank you Andrea! :))) xomo
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 2:40 AM
Always downwind super Mo, otherwise they’d sense what’s coming, or perhaps just go along with the usual human trait to bury our heads and let it happen, thought provoking, cheers David
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Keep your head busy and your hands to yourself, or is it keep your hands busy and your head to yourself, or it’s both… xomo
Faulkner Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:05 PM
The long and winding roads - all lead to Rome :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 8:11 AM
…when in Rome! ;),
Leffanta Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Non scents?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Ya gotta stink a little ~x
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 10:15 AM
very interesting Mo....my tiny brain cells will be batting this one around alllllll day
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 10:29 AM
the gift that keeps on giving, neuroplasticity ~x
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