A Legend In His Own Mind

There once was an angry old man,
Who thought he had the only plan.
He was smarter than most,
And of this he would boast.
He thought of himself as just grand.

The angry old man had a wife,
Whose life he oft filled with strife.
He described her as moody.
Just stupid and broody.
She told him to go get a life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ashford Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 11:43 PM
Ha! That was fun. Ask my wife, she would say pretty much the same thing, but of course I am different! Fine write
Romios Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 11:17 AM
E moes this from beginning to end Panagiota
Maverick Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Simply good Judy.'
Hoffman Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 8:47 PM
This fun limerick brought a smile to my face ; reminds me of a couple I know!:)
Roper Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Angry old man needs to stay under the bed and not come out or he'll get stumped. Love your Limerick
Ball Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Thank you so much Eve. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 3:50 PM
I enjoyed this, Judy. it's got that good old limerick beat!
Ball Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Thanks so much Andrea. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 12:48 PM
love the title and the limericks Judy! hugs Jan xx
Ball Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 2:50 PM
Thanks so much Jan. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
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November 8, 2016 at 11:41 AM
The angry old man was me, By the time I felt clever and free. Then, I met you, a real Poetry My dear Judy, And so happy, I started to sing:" I feel pretty, oh so pretty! "I feel pretty and witty and bright..." Actually, I have not good voice But I keep my face in the light. So, that was my better choice.
Ball Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Thank you so much Ovidiu my friend. Glad you enjoyed this fun limerick and I loved your review. So clever and it brought a smile to my face. God Bless, JB
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