A Legacy Swen In The Fabric Of The Universe

As the days pass, so does our youth, 
      but memories that were made
            have been like a treasure trove of jewels 
                      that have been sewn into our soul, 
                                    hidden away and treasured.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 3:05 PM
beautiful words. your poem deeply touched me. Thank you.
Gayagay Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 1:52 AM
Memories are "like a treasure trove of jewels...sewn into our soul." Lovely analogy. Short yet meaningful. Love it.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 12:18 PM
What a lovely and true write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" If for a contest... Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Leake Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 11:39 AM
Nicely Written Eve We all have hidden treasures Best wishes Kevin
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 3:06 AM
- Beautifully written, Eve... and so true :) - hugs
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