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A Left Hand Made Verse 1

As human creatures do not recognize each other I think: it’s time for us to stand one after another. And some time ago, - it was when I was wrapped in your body as in the wool blanket and pushed two paper ships into the salty lakes - your eyes, when the land decreased around our bodies so that we could touch one another’s land and I said: it’s time to stop struggle, it’s high time for peace, we must return to peace. – That very moment an unusually hot autumn Was blowing the streets like leaves according to my verse that I had written by chance before we met: “I put on spring like apron but dying leaves are falling in my dinner anyway”. So cold it was. We were standing beyond the peace and were going out from our land.

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Date: 5/28/2014 6:12:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/23/2014 1:53:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Kato :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2014 12:02:00 PM
KATO,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/22/2014 8:33:00 AM
Kato, interesting Sega's to post, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. .~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/22/2014 4:51:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup, look to read more of your work
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Kato Javakhishvili
Date: 5/22/2014 4:57:00 AM
Thank you Diane

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