A Leave of Absence

Don't look for her
At the break of day
No need to call either
She has gone away.

She left behind
A path of tears
She took a drive
To a place of peace.

Don't knock on her door
And call her name
No need to implore
She knows your games.

It is way too late
She'll be gone for a while
She has turned the page
Your regrets are futile.

Don't wait for her
Don't hope for her return
No need to bother
She believes not your words.

She will not leave a trace
for you to follow
To wait here is a waste
Better for you to let go.

Don't look for her
At the break of day
No need to call either
She has gone away.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 06.24.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/28/2010 9:31:00 AM
Yes, Caroline-Cécile, can feel with this poem! It also happened to me with my fiancee once. She left without any explanation and till today I have no idea why. Than finally I gave up asking. Enjoyed your poem and thank you for your welcome comments! ...Alles Gute1...Gert
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Date: 6/25/2010 9:14:00 AM
People often have to live with regrets that they didn't treat someone better. Then, at last, it is too late to do anything about it. Love the message and the melodic flow of your wonderfuly rhyme! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/25/2010 6:57:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Caroline. Love, Carol
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