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A Leap of Affection

Pay attention now! Silence for just a moment shut your eyes, do your ears feel the water dripping wet in the distance March towards the sound don't look around just look ahead Wait! what's that. Shut your eyes pay attention again It sounds like water speeding up hard and fast while striking some kind of aim Open your eyes, do you see something Keep walking eyes pealed not understanding what you are about to come face to face with Look around what do you see Just smiling with what is in front of you! All you want to do is grin for what magnificence that lies in front of you brings chills directly down your spine The thrilling water fall makes you a leap of affection -Nikhil Chandwani

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Date: 12/12/2012 4:47:00 AM
WHoa! Beautifully written Nikhil! I love how you've built up the suspense -nice. And equating affection to a waterfall- clever imagery. It reflects well the amount of trust needed when it comes to emotions. Well done!
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