A Leap Forthwith

Punctuated by the virtual fifth degree, 
 he placed his neck on the line,
 the sucking, pinching tidal wave to slip away from the soft comforts and relapsed boredom.

 The new, energized voices, never spelling the conventional way,
 the pages of books he'd read, once or twice, erased and reread, compounding and retreating back to proto-motion.

 The motion that is now, clear to him, a cog in a single machine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 9:01 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Superb write Daniel that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
A  Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 12:05 AM
Daniel, congratulations. Forever **SKAT**
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