A leaf falls

a dry leaf fell, consigned to dust
it knew life flows on as it must
it had no desires to fulfil
ways of God it hand learnt to trust

having fully surrendered will
easy was soul’s ascent uphill
being from dark desires unchained
heart was at peace, blissful and still

another leaf fell, its soul stained
detachment in heart, not ingrained
desire caused it to be reborn
that it may be slowly retrained

oh hermit, unless ego’s shorn
we ourselves subject soul to scorn
knowing not light of God within
heeding not call of love’s bliss horn
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Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Sounds like: To everything there is a mission, a purpose. Once fulfilled -- return to the Source to await further instructions.
Seeker Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 12:04 AM
The closest analogy is a dream, where we are both the dreamer (subject) and the dreamed (object). Life is a dream too!
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August 3, 2025 at 6:54 PM
Inspired by the Brihadaranyaka Upanishad
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