A Lazy Afternoon

I sit  on my deck on this lazy afternoon
watching the sun move slowly to the west

The leaves are dancing on the oak tree out back 
from a breeze gently blowing from the south

A sparrow is hopping from post to post 
on the old fence down by the road

A little squirrel  playing  and running around
to the top of the tree and down to the ground

then I hear a whistle from a distant train
And the rhythm is like music to my ears

I  think to myself  what wonderful way 
to spend a  beautiful  lazy  afternoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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March 26, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Oma Bennett, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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August 10, 2015 at 7:38 PM
OMA, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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February 28, 2009 at 8:10 PM
Oma, enjoying the glory and beauty of nature and her creatures is a wonderful way to spend a "beautiful lazy afternoon." I float in my pool, sometimes for hours, listening to the birds and allowing my imagination to run wild. It helps inspire creative writing, doesn't it? Love this poem, Carolyn
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October 13, 2008 at 3:27 PM
what a beautiful write and I would love to spend a lazy afternoon like this, take care D-ncye
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