A Lasting Treaty

Wars cause only destruction and death
leaving behind scenes gloomier than itself:
bloody bodies strewn on dry leaves,
while the jubilant king falls to his knees...
thanking God who has brought him victory,
but then looking at his hands he ponders with asperity.


" I have built a kingdom by demanding loyalty,
accumulated a huge army allowing stealing and killing;
but none of this is mine, not even my castle and sovereignty,
I am a horrible king as others have been before me...
I must issue a lasting treaty to save many from dying! "


And standing on the barren hill overlooking the citadel,
he cried out as the wind brushed his long hair so curly,
" Forgive me all, from now on there will be a lasting treaty...
food for all and the best wine in a land that once was evil! "




Copyright 2012 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mehta Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 4:42 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Andrew
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September 24, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Andrew.......Congrats................. Love~SKAT~
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September 24, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Andrew, :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15948&PoetID=18720 always & forever **LINDA
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June 18, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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June 17, 2012 at 7:31 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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June 17, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Andrew,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD
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May 19, 2012 at 1:48 PM
It's good that the king realized how badly he had led his people. If only all rulers would make the vow he did in your last two lines! Andrew, you deserved your win -- you had to please two judges. I loved your entry! Wish I could talk to you someday. I feel a special connection to your poetry and to you as a friend. If he send me a phone number, I'll call. Love you too, Carolyn
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