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A Last Line Prompt

Rendezvous Shopping in the arcade their eyes met For long they magnetically froze White silver haired with bags in hand They slowly moved forward with guarded steps Their hands became weak as their bags slipped Hugging and crying over the years gone by Remembering their silent love decades ago Of their escape from the concentration camp And how war played foul and changed their lives They were to meet at the cafe in the twilight hour But their rendezvous was burnt down and area guarded They went their different ways to save their families Instead of drinking coffee in the cafés of Berlin January 30, 2016 Contest : A Last Line Prompt Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 2/7/2016 6:59:00 AM
Good job, dear Balveen... congratulations on your placement.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/11/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 2/5/2016 7:21:00 AM
Hi Balveen. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/11/2016 4:27:00 AM
Thanks Teddy!
Date: 2/4/2016 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Balveen. Your poem was written so well to end with the last line prompt! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/5/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 2/4/2016 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/5/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Susan!
Date: 2/4/2016 11:07:00 AM
Very nice, and a worthy Honorable Mention in my contest. Well done!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/5/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Julia! It was an unexpected win!

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