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A Lady Named Liz

Once knew a lady named Liz She could have made it in show biz With the voice of an angel She had me disabled In a pop can Liz was the fizz © Jack Ellison 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/20/2013 8:35:00 AM
Witty
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2013 8:37:00 AM
Thank you muchly Gwen... please come again! Hugs xox
Date: 10/8/2013 8:17:00 AM
OH NO! You have Dragon trying to sing! Even his beloved penguins are running... We tried to distract him with a guitar... but it didn't work... Then a drum set put down by Troll Lake... But the Merry River turtles put a stop to that... They said it was revibrating throughout their submarine... Grandpa invited everyone to a breakfast of Dragon, turtle, and penguin shaped pancakes... It works every time! Mine were one of each that looked like my sweet friends with a cup of warm coco, of course!
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:39:00 AM
I've missed my daily Dragon and Troll and other assorted friends of yours! Love ya "strange" lady (and I mean that in the most loving way! LOL) xoxoxoxox
Date: 10/7/2013 5:55:00 PM
fun one, Jack!
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Date: 10/7/2013 6:26:00 PM
The Quatrain King does a Limerick... how unusual is that! Glad you liked it dear Andrea! Hugs, Jack xox
Date: 10/7/2013 3:17:00 PM
HA HA! This is brilliant my friend! I surely loved reading such a lovely and entertaining Limerick as this one Jack! You sure know how to make a person smile, even when he doesn't want to! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/7/2013 5:37:00 PM
That's "my man"... not "my mn" LOL
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Date: 10/7/2013 5:36:00 PM
Whoaaaa! The Quatrain King is going out on a limb! LOL Thanks my mn!
Date: 10/7/2013 11:13:00 AM
From Quatrain King to Limerick Lord! Nicely done, Jack! :) xox
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Date: 10/7/2013 11:54:00 AM
Going to take some medication and lie down for a while! LOL Love ya my new found friend! xoxox
Date: 10/7/2013 8:41:00 AM
Intriguing last 2 lines...it feels mysteriously layered. Awesomely done! =)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/7/2013 11:55:00 AM
Thank you once again, my good friend Drake... much appreciated as always!