A Lady Named Liz

Once knew a lady named Liz She could have made it in show biz With the voice of an angel She had me disabled In a pop can Liz was the fizz © Jack Ellison 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mason Gibbs Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Witty
Ellison Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 8:37 AM
Thank you muchly Gwen... please come again! Hugs xox
Eastman Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 8:17 AM
OH NO! You have Dragon trying to sing! Even his beloved penguins are running... We tried to distract him with a guitar... but it didn't work... Then a drum set put down by Troll Lake... But the Merry River turtles put a stop to that... They said it was revibrating throughout their submarine... Grandpa invited everyone to a breakfast of Dragon, turtle, and penguin shaped pancakes... It works every time! Mine were one of each that looked like my sweet friends with a cup of warm coco, of course!
Ellison Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 8:39 AM
I've missed my daily Dragon and Troll and other assorted friends of yours! Love ya "strange" lady (and I mean that in the most loving way! LOL) xoxoxoxox
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 5:55 PM
fun one, Jack!
Ellison Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 6:26 PM
The Quatrain King does a Limerick... how unusual is that! Glad you liked it dear Andrea! Hugs, Jack xox
Sivey Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 3:17 PM
HA HA! This is brilliant my friend! I surely loved reading such a lovely and entertaining Limerick as this one Jack! You sure know how to make a person smile, even when he doesn't want to! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 5:37 PM
That's "my man"... not "my mn" LOL
Ellison Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Whoaaaa! The Quatrain King is going out on a limb! LOL Thanks my mn!
Tacito Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Intriguing last 2 lines...it feels mysteriously layered. Awesomely done! =)
Ellison Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Thank you once again, my good friend Drake... much appreciated as always!
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