A Kowloon Sea

In Liverpool, England, there is one street containing 
all the Chinese restaurants, side to side, back to back
and stinking drain to sea.
where once a year,  twirling dragons pierce the afternoon air,
passing old men with suits and moneyed-hands, their 
young thugs standing close with tatooed skin.

the crowd, mostly mums and dads and tots in prams, heaves 
like weed on a Kowloon sea...hungry for the firecracker 
bangs and dim-sum smells and potted green tea.

this riot of shifting colour drags and pushes at the cobbled
road underfoot, as the dragon takes another bag of pak choy 
greens placed ten foot high, while the lithe boys dressed in 
kung fu black and draped with skill, reach up to pluck the
fiscal bunch and pass it down, hand to hand, out of sight, 
to the flashing, bouncing jaws beneath

and soon the fire cracker thunder and emptied shops
call the street to book: and a carnage of paper to-go boxes 
and spilt terror join with the bars' beery breath 
saying...go home now Englishmen, you are not our brothers, 
this is our place not yours..go home til next year

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/20/2015 11:03:00 PM
this is very intelligent writing. I love it. A well deserved top win. congratulations.
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Date: 2/16/2015 1:50:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Peter - very vivid imagery:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/16/2015 3:14:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning work Peter!
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 2/16/2015 4:56:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 2/16/2015 1:00:00 AM
Peter, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win*** Love **SKAT
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Date: 2/16/2015 4:55:00 AM
Thanks pal!...Peter
Date: 2/15/2015 6:53:00 PM
Just wonderful to see a poet take the creative challenge by the horns and run with it, please do write more for my contests. Congrad's Light & Love
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 2/16/2015 4:57:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend!...Peter
Date: 1/29/2015 8:43:00 AM
You have a flair for the pugnacious. Thanks for real poetry.
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