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A Kiss of Sunset

Day gives in to night Crimson hues paint the sky A kiss from Heaven Shannon Deane For P.D.'s 'Sunset Haiku' contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/12/2012 8:00:00 PM
A poem that wraps its arms around you!
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Date: 11/18/2011 9:22:00 AM
Sweet! Where are you watching these beautiful sunsets? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/17/2011 11:31:00 AM
Akisssfromsoftbeautifullipsss
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Date: 11/16/2011 1:58:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Interesting perspective. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 11/15/2011 5:18:00 PM
Wonderful end line for this smile-inducing haiku, Shannon :) I really liked how you described the sunset here :) and thank you again for dropping by my blog :)
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Date: 11/13/2011 11:40:00 PM
It's a kiss in your haiku...it's a Van Gogh to me..either way, Shannon, it's brilliant. Kisses from heaven from our heavenly father do sound amazing. Enjoyed. Gwendolen
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Date: 11/13/2011 9:23:00 AM
Caravan Kissess ************************************************************************* Precious is the blood that weeps and sometimes spills amid these needs... ************************************************************************* ...“My Gypsy Luv” * ...“Thank You * My Sweeet Beautiful Luv * `Your Sarah.`” *
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Date: 11/12/2011 10:10:00 PM
* “My Breast Are Ripe * My Neck Is Bare * Still, Waiting For Your Beauties Bite * MmM * My Beautiful Luv * Always & Forever * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/11/2011 9:47:00 AM
* “Anxiously Waiting * `Luv, Sarah.`” *
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:41:00 AM
nice i like this:!
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Date: 11/11/2011 6:38:00 AM
* “Good Morning My Beautiful You * Just Stopping By to Give Your Sweetness * A Warm Wet Kisss * My Beautiful Love * My Luv to Your Sweet Beauty Always & Forever * `Your Sarah.`” *
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Date: 11/10/2011 1:27:00 PM
... * “SoupMail * `Maiden of My Love.`” *
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Date: 11/9/2011 7:32:00 PM
congratulations on the win, sunset colors seen within...
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Date: 11/9/2011 8:01:00 AM
Lovely title Shannon to a wonderfully painted Haiku :)
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Date: 11/9/2011 7:59:00 AM
* Ps. * “Thank You * As Always Shall Be Your Beauty * Beyound The Edge of The World * My Luv, Forevermore * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/9/2011 5:53:00 AM
* “If Only Your Lovely Beauty Knew * My Dear Sweeet Beautiful * Owww Sooo Very Beautiful * Beautiful Shannon * How That Your Sweeet Beauty Makes My Heart Rush * With Just One Touch * Thank You * For Your Priceless Treasures, Lovely Visit * Joy to The World * My Luv * My Luv * Always & Forever * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/9/2011 12:11:00 AM
I see congratulations are in order. Way to GO!!
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Date: 11/8/2011 5:32:00 PM
Congrats Shannon on a superb win luv with this delightful vision in Haiku,.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:19:00 PM
Oh, I love the idea of heaven sharing a kiss with Earth. Very nice haiku, Shannon. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:34:00 AM
Many congrats on your winning write Shannon - this is the first time I have read one of your pieces and I look forward to reading many more - rgds Janette
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Date: 11/8/2011 7:45:00 AM
A beautiful picture you have painted with your pen in this winning gem.. luv to you Michael
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Date: 11/8/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Shannon. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2011 1:38:00 AM
Shannon congrats on your win..David
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:59:00 PM
SHANNON~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/7/2011 12:59:00 PM
* “SoupMail * My Beautiful Queen * My Luv * Always, `Your Sarah.`” *
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