A Kiss In the Dark

Blinded and saving the love talk in the dark
In a sensuous connection came a spark
An active mind bee-lined for a kiss
Shilly-shally bemused as lass remarks
Lips to nose in a clear view face, turns dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Michael Tanjang Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 3:41 PM
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November 27, 2013 at 1:41 AM
AKO, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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October 4, 2013 at 4:23 AM
this is a mellifluous romantic poem with strong metaphor and imagery. ''''Lips to nose in a clear view face, turns dark"" maginifique. There is a hint of human schizophrenia in the last verse; nothing seems what it is, thatz what makes life so incomprehensible. thank u
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