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A Kiss In the Dark

Blinded and saving the love talk in the dark In a sensuous connection came a spark An active mind bee-lined for a kiss Shilly-shally bemused as lass remarks Lips to nose in a clear view face, turns dark.

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Temajung Michael Tanjang

Date: 4/18/2014 3:41:00 PM

MASTERPIECE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/27/2013 1:41:00 AM

AKO, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Gerald Nforche

Date: 10/4/2013 4:23:00 AM

this is a mellifluous romantic poem with strong metaphor and imagery. ''''Lips to nose in a clear view face, turns dark"" maginifique. There is a hint of human schizophrenia in the last verse; nothing seems what it is, thatz what makes life so incomprehensible. thank u