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Poetry/Rhyme/A Kiss In The Dark
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All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, December 20, 2024
For the International Contest, This or That, Vol. 29
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 12/29/2024

Third Place

The Poetry of Exile—James Joyce, Rumi & Adrian Rice — Steemit

A Kiss In The Dark

 
He heard her weeping from another realm, and he was determined that he would time travel; all he knew of his life began to unravel, and no matter the dangers he would journey to her world. On earth Anna's thoughts day and night overwhelm, he finds her in the garden of a home among the blooms; later he followed her through all the elegant rooms, and finally in her room she prepares for bed with care. But, she hesitates as a wispy fog fills the air, in the dark he strokes her long raven hair and holds her close; she feels him and although she cannot see him . . . he is her rose. And in that moment their love unfurled, then, with a kiss in the dark and wrapped in love they disappear and all that Anna leaves in this earthly world is a tear.
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Ibeh Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 4:39 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this exquisite, poignant poem, Constance. I enjoyed the beautiful imagery and rhyme scheme that gives the poem a seamless flow. Bravo! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:51 PM
Edward, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment and comment, Happy New Year ~
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December 20, 2024 at 10:25 AM
That is beautiful Constance, a joy to read… Beryl
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:52 PM
Beryl, thank you so much for the compliment ~
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