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A Kiss



at last our lips meet
you speak with more than just words
drowning so sweetly

 



For the sensuous senryu contest

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George Aul

June 29, 2011 at 11:47 AM

Congrats on a sweet write........George

Black Eyed Susan

June 28, 2011 at 9:58 AM

Congratualtions on your win! I read all of the winners but yours is my favorite :)

Carolyn Devonshire

June 28, 2011 at 2:48 AM

"Drowning so sweetly" ... Wow, Barbara. You know you have something special when you are communicating with "more than just words." So happy to see you in the winners' circle, dear LNC. Love you, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

June 27, 2011 at 8:23 PM

"at last our lips meet." i have said that line for april who said i was a good kisser.

John Loving Iii

June 27, 2011 at 8:20 PM

looking for old friends and what they have done lately. so far you have been the only one to turn me on, thank you for this. john h loving iii

Andrea Dietrich

June 27, 2011 at 5:56 PM

Sensuous indeed, sweetie! I really like this. (oh, I see the contest is judged. Congrats!)

June 27, 2011 at 3:20 PM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Francine's contest. Alexa

Wilma Neels

June 27, 2011 at 2:48 PM

Woo, I love this BG! Congratulations to you ;)

Debbie Guzzi

June 27, 2011 at 2:01 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

June 27, 2011 at 2:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 27, 2011 at 1:30 PM

Congrats BG on your spectacular win with this lovely sensuous senryu .. perfect words luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 27, 2011 at 12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 27, 2011 at 11:55 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Barbara

Caryl Muzzey

June 27, 2011 at 10:21 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Francine Roberts

June 27, 2011 at 10:08 AM

beautiful senryu Barbara, congrats on your 10th place win in the contest

John Rhinem

June 27, 2011 at 12:02 AM

Smile ~ “Very Beautiful Poem `My Dear Precious & Priceless Barbara!!!` ~ Drowning In Love & I Just Left Our Dear HG A Few Ago ~ I Believe That `His Priceless Heart` Shall Love This Wonderful Expression of `A Hearts Love,` Just A I Do ~ `Very Lovely ~ Love, Always,`” John!:) ~