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A Kiss

at last our lips meet you speak with more than just words drowning so sweetly For the sensuous senryu contest

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George Aul

Date: 6/29/2011 11:47:00 AM

Congrats on a sweet write........George

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/28/2011 9:58:00 AM

Congratualtions on your win! I read all of the winners but yours is my favorite :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 2:48:00 AM

"Drowning so sweetly" ... Wow, Barbara. You know you have something special when you are communicating with "more than just words." So happy to see you in the winners' circle, dear LNC. Love you, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/27/2011 8:23:00 PM

"at last our lips meet." i have said that line for april who said i was a good kisser.

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/27/2011 8:20:00 PM

looking for old friends and what they have done lately. so far you have been the only one to turn me on, thank you for this. john h loving iii

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 5:56:00 PM

Sensuous indeed, sweetie! I really like this. (oh, I see the contest is judged. Congrats!)

Date: 6/27/2011 3:20:00 PM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Francine's contest. Alexa

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/27/2011 2:48:00 PM

Woo, I love this BG! Congratulations to you ;)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 2:01:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 2:00:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 1:30:00 PM

Congrats BG on your spectacular win with this lovely sensuous senryu .. perfect words luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 11:55:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Barbara

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/27/2011 10:08:00 AM

beautiful senryu Barbara, congrats on your 10th place win in the contest

John Rhinem

Date: 6/27/2011 12:02:00 AM

Smile ~ “Very Beautiful Poem `My Dear Precious & Priceless Barbara!!!` ~ Drowning In Love & I Just Left Our Dear HG A Few Ago ~ I Believe That `His Priceless Heart` Shall Love This Wonderful Expression of `A Hearts Love,` Just A I Do ~ `Very Lovely ~ Love, Always,`” John!:) ~

Johnny Sumler

Date: 6/26/2011 7:01:00 PM

Best of luck with this beautiful write. "drowning so sweetly" -very nice BG!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/26/2011 6:18:00 PM

Lovely sensuous expression, Barbara

Date: 6/26/2011 5:46:00 PM

Beautiful write, very sensuous good luck in the contest. Alexa