Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

A Kiss

By Michael  Falotico


                                                  If I blew a kiss..
                                         would it travel to your sky..
                                               or get lost in mine..
                                                

"Whatever" contest

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Ashley Plotczyk June 22, 2011 at 5:25 PM I like this!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2011 at 10:09 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Michael. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2011 at 4:48 PM Awww, this is so sweet. I don't think I'd seen it yet. Congrats on your great deserved win, Michael.

Robert A. Dufresne May 15, 2011 at 6:12 AM wonderful thoughtful imagery. Well done Michael. Great win! Congratulations to you!

Nette Onclaud May 14, 2011 at 9:41 PM you really wowed me here, dear michael... my happy cheers for the greeat win! :) huggs

Barbara Gorelick May 14, 2011 at 8:30 PM I vote for the kiss traveling to her sky...congrats on your big win..love it. BG

John Freeman May 14, 2011 at 6:06 PM Great to see you in top three spot Michael. Congratulations on your poem's success in Brian's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 14, 2011 at 4:35 PM Very nice way of letting that kiss travel-- hmm now you got me wondering as well where it goes? I see you won, so Congrats hugs on your win :)

Carolyn Devonshire May 14, 2011 at 1:52 PM Delighted to see your poem getting well-deserved recognition, Michael. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 14, 2011 at 1:23 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 14, 2011 at 12:59 PM Congrats to my White Knight on the kiss of a lifetime ..in the Whatever contest .. a delectable and irrisistible invitation luv.. enjoy another top ten victory .. your Jersey Girl in breathtaking mode..luv.. congrats..

Wilma Neels May 14, 2011 at 12:28 PM Midnight is in 2 and a half hours lol .. I will be waiting ;) lol

Wilma Neels May 14, 2011 at 11:45 AM Only one way to find out Michael.. Blow me one lol jk, quite enjoyed this lovely write MF ;) love Wilma

Ana-Maria Bituna May 14, 2011 at 4:12 AM this was beautiful, and the style of writing, i probably have to read more about senryu poetry, but this blew me away. superb

M.I.A . May 13, 2011 at 6:10 PM Enjoyed! very!

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2011 at 5:49 PM now what a delightful thought... a Michael Kiss traveling to find that one special lips... hope it finds whatever invasion your heart desires... how sweet it is... take care,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire May 13, 2011 at 2:16 PM Simply beautiful, Michael. A fine entry for Brian's contest. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet May 12, 2011 at 8:23 AM Amazing poetry here Michael.Enjoyed....

Dr.Ram Mehta May 12, 2011 at 8:03 AM beautifully done with the twist at the end, Michael, needing no luck a sure winner,

C.C Bloomsfield May 11, 2011 at 11:06 PM Ow teasing senryu. .sweet and sweet is the kiss whatever

Caryl Muzzey May 11, 2011 at 7:29 PM A wonderful Senryu, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest, there seems to be alot of kissn' going on in this one. Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 11, 2011 at 4:30 PM Well I would be looking for it Michael and raising a kite to catch it luv..haha.. ssshhhh ... nice entry for Brian's new contest ..good luck.. your Jersey Girl is now in kissing mode since reading your lines.. oh Ron..where are u luv? business meetings keeping him busy.. oh..