A Kiss

"One" kiss so fervent surely the universe shook- Aroused as sexual pleasures of man, woman, scents - touch, elevate to ecstacy - Comparable to none! Like stars fall from sky ignites into atoms-a-flame! One-time passion avowed Ne'er to unveil - tete-a-tete contained within ones heart - Nevermore to be savored Like taste of caviar - lingers forevermore - that "One" kiss!

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 5:27:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Virginia Muller

Date: 5/17/2009 2:01:00 PM

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I am so proud to be featured this week. I need to become more active on this site. Again, thank you all so much. I really appreciate your support. Ginny

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/17/2009 1:56:00 PM

Virginia,congrats on being featured this week!

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 5/17/2009 8:05:00 AM

Beautiful kiss, Virginia. Congratulations on being featured this week. Poetically yours, Iolanda

Reality .

Date: 5/16/2009 3:46:00 PM

I love this poem with passion.! Great details -Reality

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/16/2009 2:04:00 PM

Virginia, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/15/2009 2:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Daver Austin

Date: 5/12/2009 6:17:00 AM

A thing of the moment, lost, but never lost. Great write. Congrats. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/12/2009 5:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/11/2009 11:09:00 AM

Congrats on your excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/11/2009 9:17:00 AM

Congratulations Virginia on "A Kiss" being featured. Nicely written. Vince

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/10/2009 10:15:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this short poem and congratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando

Virginia Muller

Date: 2/13/2009 9:54:00 AM

Hi Chris and Michael..Thank you for your comments. I remember this kiss like it was yesterday. (Trust me, it was a long, long time ago, ) but not one to ever be forgotten. Ginny

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/13/2009 8:57:00 AM

I was reading this piece and that song popped in my head..This kiss..this kiss...now it is lingering..LOL..loved this piece..I can feel the kiss. Well done.

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/13/2009 8:50:00 AM

Oh, that one kiss can cause so much passion, be that special one that is always remembered. A lovely well formated read. Michael