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A King's Worth

This much is true...

           a king ain't just a king.
         He ain't nothin' but a title;
            just a powerless man.

        He's Samson with his hair    
  chopped off; a man who looks silly
        with a crown atop his head.

            He's a man who looks
          as lonely as a lighthouse
                 on his throne.

        A king ain't worth a damn
               without a queen
              to share his castle

          ....that much is true!


Writing Prompt - Take the Dagger Out Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)
 Sponsored by Dear Heart 
Date: 02/05/2020

Submitted for...
Strand Select 9, Any Form, Any Theme Poetry Contest(N/A)
Date judged : 01/12/2020

Date written: 11/08/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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La France Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Edward, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 9:02 PM
Thank you very much for my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Kauffman Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:21 PM
Edward, Congratulations on your win and omage to a king supported by a queen and putting power into perspective!
Ibeh Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Thank you for your continued support, Sam:-) Most appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 5:49 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-)
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:26 PM
congratulations on your win ...wonderful write :) hugs
Ibeh Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Thank you, Sandra:-)
Chiri Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:12 PM
Edward congratulations on your win!;)
Ibeh Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Thank you, Brenda:-)
May Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Congratulation on your Placement! Edward magnificent tribute!!
Ibeh Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Thank you so much for placing me, Bobby:-) Most obliged.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 2:36 PM
What a wonderful tribute to wives everywhere Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Thank you, Caren:-)
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