A Kind Word

A KIND WORD 

A pat 
A hug
A scolding 
A kind word.

A push
A pause 
A listening ear 
A helping hand.

Those we truly touch never forget, 
Even long after the moment is passed.
O yes!

Like clay in the hands of the potter,
Those we form forever stay firm, 
Long after our supporting hands are removed!

Like tempered steel, our words can build and strengthen,
If spoken from a heart of flesh: as with winks or blinks and silences screamed in voiceless mode. True talk! 

But, our words can also freeze into stone and inaction, as with a gorgon’s stare
When love is blinded and hearts calcified. 
Factual! 

The latter leads to dreams broken and wings in mid-flight burdened with dead weight;
Where hope is dashed, dreams in ashes and the fire that keeps alive forever banked in cold coal. 

And the former? So like the risen sun, the gallop of the antelope through luxuriant field, 
And the graceful ascent of the swan in exultant flight!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/23/2015 7:11:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem its lovley
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Paul Obah
Date: 8/25/2015 3:32:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Diane.
Date: 8/23/2015 12:25:00 AM
Paul, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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Paul Obah
Date: 8/25/2015 3:33:00 PM
Thanks Skat, for your comment. It's been a while since I checked poetrysoup last.
Date: 7/29/2015 12:49:00 AM
I'm glad I hard from you also it is my pleasure to meet you........ Soupmail..........A.M.
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:20:00 PM
Hi Paul, it was nice hearing from you. :) I will be here for a while. Hope you post another poem. SKAT
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Paul Obah
Date: 7/28/2015 9:32:00 PM
Thanks Skat. It's 3:31am in Nigeria now, 29th July. I'll be back before the day is over. Thanks for the kind words.
Date: 7/28/2015 7:58:00 PM
What a fabulous penned to wellcome yourself to a wonderful community where you will meet variety of people who are willing and ready to support by giving you positive feedback. it is nice to see your face here, I would like you to check me up, hope you don't mind............A.M.
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Paul Obah
Date: 7/28/2015 8:39:00 PM
Thank for the kind word, Afolabi. Checking you up right now.
Date: 7/28/2015 7:49:00 PM
I love this beautiful piece of yours. Excellence......A.M.
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Date: 7/27/2015 8:28:00 PM
Paul, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Paul Obah
Date: 7/28/2015 8:24:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. A friend introduced me to poetry soup two days ago. I haven't had time to explore but I'm impressed thus far. Thanks, poetry soup for giving me voice!
Date: 7/27/2015 12:00:00 PM
Paul, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Paul Obah
Date: 7/28/2015 8:30:00 PM
Hi Skat, Thanks plenty for a very warm welcome. My name is Paul. I was born at a time when Nigeria looked like it we going to be torn apart: the Nigerian civil war! May I ask that you permit me to post a rejoinder of sorts to this by way of a 'poem' in some few hours time? I'm loving this!
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