A Kind Word

A KIND WORD 

A pat 
A hug
A scolding 
A kind word.

A push
A pause 
A listening ear 
A helping hand.

Those we truly touch never forget, 
Even long after the moment is passed.
O yes!

Like clay in the hands of the potter,
Those we form forever stay firm, 
Long after our supporting hands are removed!

Like tempered steel, our words can build and strengthen,
If spoken from a heart of flesh: as with winks or blinks and silences screamed in voiceless mode. True talk! 

But, our words can also freeze into stone and inaction, as with a gorgon’s stare
When love is blinded and hearts calcified. 
Factual! 

The latter leads to dreams broken and wings in mid-flight burdened with dead weight;
Where hope is dashed, dreams in ashes and the fire that keeps alive forever banked in cold coal. 

And the former? So like the risen sun, the gallop of the antelope through luxuriant field, 
And the graceful ascent of the swan in exultant flight!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Christian Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 7:11 AM
congratulations on your featured poem its lovley
Obah Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Thanks so very much, Diane.
A  Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Paul, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
Obah Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Thanks Skat, for your comment. It's been a while since I checked poetrysoup last.
Muideen Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 12:49 AM
I'm glad I hard from you also it is my pleasure to meet you........ Soupmail..........A.M.
A  Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Hi Paul, it was nice hearing from you. :) I will be here for a while. Hope you post another poem. SKAT
Obah Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 9:32 PM
Thanks Skat. It's 3:31am in Nigeria now, 29th July. I'll be back before the day is over. Thanks for the kind words.
Muideen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:58 PM
What a fabulous penned to wellcome yourself to a wonderful community where you will meet variety of people who are willing and ready to support by giving you positive feedback. it is nice to see your face here, I would like you to check me up, hope you don't mind............A.M.
Obah Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 8:39 PM
Thank for the kind word, Afolabi. Checking you up right now.
Muideen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:49 PM
I love this beautiful piece of yours. Excellence......A.M.
A   Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Paul, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Obah Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 8:24 PM
Thanks, Linda. A friend introduced me to poetry soup two days ago. I haven't had time to explore but I'm impressed thus far. Thanks, poetry soup for giving me voice!
A  Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Paul, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Obah Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Hi Skat, Thanks plenty for a very warm welcome. My name is Paul. I was born at a time when Nigeria looked like it we going to be torn apart: the Nigerian civil war! May I ask that you permit me to post a rejoinder of sorts to this by way of a 'poem' in some few hours time? I'm loving this!
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