Edward Ibeh Poet Shape

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Date written: 04/26/2025

A Keyhole

         oh, the world out there....                  
           I can see***daylight, 
          a thread*      *of light
            emerging  gradually, 
           creeping*    *indoors;
     moonbeam*        *piercing 
         through*           * the dark.
      a keyless*********keyhole

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Kim Rodrigues May 2, 2025 at 1:02 PM Oh, yes! This one made its way to the top! Congrats, Edward! Edward Ibeh May 2, 2025 at 1:20 PM Thank you very much indeed, Kim:-)

Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2025 at 6:18 PM Interesting to see what the small keyhole reveals! Edward Ibeh April 27, 2025 at 8:46 PM Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Kim:-)

Sotto Poet April 26, 2025 at 6:42 PM You perfectly mimicked the keyhole, Edward. Great shape poem. Edward Ibeh April 26, 2025 at 8:41 PM Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)

I Am Anaya April 26, 2025 at 6:30 PM Great imagery coming out of the keyhole, nice job! Edward Ibeh April 26, 2025 at 8:41 PM Thank you very much, Anaya:-)