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Date written: 04/26/2025

oh, the world out there.... I can see***daylight, a thread* *of light emerging gradually, creeping* *indoors; moonbeam* *piercing through* * the dark. a keyless*********keyhole

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Date: 5/2/2025 1:02:00 PM
Oh, yes! This one made its way to the top! Congrats, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/2/2025 1:20:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Kim:-)
Date: 4/27/2025 6:18:00 PM
Interesting to see what the small keyhole reveals!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/27/2025 8:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Kim:-)
Date: 4/26/2025 6:42:00 PM
You perfectly mimicked the keyhole, Edward. Great shape poem.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/26/2025 8:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)
Date: 4/26/2025 6:30:00 PM
Great imagery coming out of the keyhole, nice job!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/26/2025 8:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anaya:-)

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