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A Key For the Maiden

she enters the room gracefully
belying the heartache inside
her tale of loss floats through the air
like a windblown kite

a mother, child, and death 
reduced to silhouettes

her vision rips a hole
where there should be love 
from this pulpit 
with its congregation of one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 6:32 PM
Richard, I so enjoy the sound of your soulful voice as I listen to your poem.. as I read along with you, I notice how delicate yet powerfully emotional your captivating imagery is and I begin to understand how masterful and deep your artistry is. You inspire me with awe for the sad beauty of this poetic gem. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 1:19 PM
I deeply appreciate your kind words, Richard. May your new year be filled with many blessings and much happiness, my dear friend.. ~Sue
Evans Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Susan you inspire me not only with your poetry but your humanity as well. Happy Holidays my friend...…………...peace!
Stevenson Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Wow - such a powerful piece! I have read it 3times now as feel it captured emotions that I struggle to express but consistently feel. Thankyou for sharing this. Mockingbird x
Evans Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 6:09 AM
If I can make someone "feel" then maybe I'm on to something. Thank you so much for your kind words...………………..peace!
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