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A Kaleidoscope of Love

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It was on our honeymoon. We strolled along the seashore Towards the lonely lighthouse Our souls bonding our love, Renewing our marriage vows, As hand in hand we trudged Upon the wet sand Despite the torrential beauty Of a lonely winter night. The raucous calls of tired gulls echoed The thoughts that swirled in our minds, Urging us towards sweeter dreams, When all our wishes would come true. We slowly climbed the rickety steps That led towards the lighthouse top. We watched the waves below As they dashed against the black rocks, Performing their deathly dance. We turned inside for respite From the storm raging outside. Our souls stirred us into a loving embrace Our kisses gleamed As once the lighthouse beam. We cared not for the world: Outside the dark night waited With its frigid gelid grip. Inside the lighthouse flashed Like a kaleidoscope of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/29/2021 6:14:00 AM
This is so lovely and romantic. Taking respite from the cold night in the warmth of the old lighthouse. The sound of the rushing waves against the shore. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/27/2021 8:40:00 AM
Beautiful Victor, “a kaleidoscope of love” what a wonderful expression. A treasured memory you’ve shared from your honeymoon, loved it… Belle
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Date: 6/25/2021 10:04:00 AM
Great imagery of love coming to life. I miss walking on the coast and watching the surf come up to shore and the splash of water cooling. The lighthouse has meaning of life to be seen and rescued. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/25/2021 3:34:00 AM
A lovely write! Romantic and descriptive.
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:59:00 AM
- A lovely and rich honeymoon ... for a loving young couple ... a beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:41:00 AM
When I was little I used to love looking through kaleidoscopes, your poetry is very colorful and dreamy, thank you for sharing Victor :)
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:33:00 AM
Our kisses gleamed As once the lighthouse beam. Gorgeous imagery, Victor! This poem is a Fave. Blessings, Evelyn :)
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Date: 6/24/2021 10:11:00 AM
Victor, your writing was quite gorgeous... I experienced as I was there via the wonderful imagery... This a fave for me   Victor, you have wonderfully caught some precious scenery. I liked the action sequences and the end. Blessings and best wishes
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:51:00 AM
The title itself is very capturing. The matter inside is superb.
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:29:00 AM
this is beautiful Victor... i felt like i was there through your wonderful imagery... glad i stopped by to read today... hugs
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:22:00 AM
A beautiful romantic write, such brilliant imagery, Victor, enjoyed:)
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:22:00 AM
WoW! Victor, You have penned such a beautiful and romantic write. Thanks for sharing such a write. Have a nice day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful moments brilliantly captured, Victor. Enjoyed the imagery and the ending.
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Date: 6/24/2021 1:38:00 AM
Your romantic pen has been busy Victor, a couple deeply in love. Tom
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Date: 6/24/2021 1:19:00 AM
Nice alignment: Inside the lighthouse flashed Like a kaleidoscope of love......Very nice...Delice
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