Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Senryu

A Juicy Kiss

Georgia peaches,
sweet and juicy,
tongue licking.

Pleasure’s nectar,
inside my mouth,
teasing taste buds.

Like your tongue
inside my lips
when we kiss.

© October 29, 2011
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 7, 2011 at 6:19 AM A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 8, 2011 at 2:49 PM Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles. Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 8, 2011 at 2:48 PM Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.

Kash Poet November 5, 2011 at 6:52 AM Hmmm...tasty.Congrats on your win Dane. Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 8, 2011 at 2:49 PM Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2011 at 8:23 PM Congratulations ,Dane Ann. Long time no hear from you!! Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 8, 2011 at 2:50 PM Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles. (Life has been hectic and very busy...miss being here, too.)

Michael J. Falotico November 4, 2011 at 3:01 PM Congrats and thanks so much for supporting my contest...... always Michael Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 8, 2011 at 2:50 PM Thank you for including me in the winner's circle! Smiles.

John Smith October 29, 2011 at 8:29 PM Know just what you mean. Love those peaches. Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 8, 2011 at 2:51 PM They say Georgia peaches are best, but I prefer the Norwegian variety, myself. LOL (Okay...Georgia peaches are superb!)

Kash Poet October 29, 2011 at 5:29 AM Hmmm.....enjoyed! Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 8, 2011 at 2:52 PM Glad you enjoyed! Smiles.