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A joyous time it was when I was young. Despite the chill, to the wind my cares were flung in winter’s world of trees with garlands hung and carols brightly sung when the bells were rung! June 13, 2017 for John Anderson's New Form - The BELL Contest Description of form: THE BELL is an elongated version of a Cinquain. It has 9 lines and rigid syllable count of 1, 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 2, 1, respectively

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John Lawless

Date: 12/8/2017 3:26:00 AM

Ah, and so fitting a revival during this season of Bells...congrats Andrea. I do remember wrestling with this form for the original contest...

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/7/2017 11:21:00 PM

Light and cheerfully wonderful, Andrea. Love it. Congrats on your win.

Carole Duet

Date: 6/23/2017 12:33:00 AM

Delightful! I love it, Andrea.

Anand Parmale

Date: 6/20/2017 5:08:00 AM

How beautiful Andrea!!! Those are the best times of our life.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/18/2017 5:54:00 PM

Hi Andrea, i love the winter, snow on the ground and Christmas. I could have Christmas every day. I love the content of this piece. An excellent form for your gentle words. A wonderful write Andrea, it just brings such a strong feeling of peace on me as i read. Has to be a fave. Hugs....mike. XX

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/18/2017 10:38:00 AM

Beautifully crafted my dear lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2017 10:47:00 AM

It already lost the contest, BL, but maybe another judge will appreciate it more!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/16/2017 10:46:00 AM

So positive and beautiful, Andrea, I love the carols too:)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/15/2017 3:13:00 PM

love this lovely write, my friend

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2017 12:30:00 PM

A Bell form which also incorporates rhyme...rings doubly well! I like the content and the memory, too. Regards // paul

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/15/2017 9:01:00 AM

great shape, and I love the image of carol singers in the snow (or at least I see snow). Nicely penned.

Joseph May

Date: 6/14/2017 8:32:00 PM

Wonderful write Andrea...hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2017 7:20:00 PM

love the shape and the meaning to it ~*

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/14/2017 2:34:00 PM

I liked this poem - "a winter's world of trees" - my later father said "poetry teaches you how to feel". He was right. I had some more poems published in "Beyond Bree" and also in the Voice Israel newsletter for June. I am still doing ESL at the community college. I tire of it sometimes but as you know it makes you more Cosmopolitan. Peace & Love Matthew Anish