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A Journey To the Pearly Gates and Back Again

Iris sun fades and so does the day whispers the carried in the silence of night glowing Wishes floating on silver trails faraway The image of your face will forever bounded to this world Angels Brought you to me made a lightening sparkling diamonds in the misting treasures gems so bright Ice roses turns into a steaming jungle of quivering glass Flashing in the distance, in the moon light and all of its stars, that's where the angels dancing A beautiful adventure picture sparklers on a winter night A cold moon dressed in dark velvet with a pearl milky white smile beams Sparkling jewel crystal lights up stars blinking silver awakening warm invading darkness your light My life has at last found its light and its hope Soulful cries a wolf dressed in winter clothes faraway over ocean waves carries in a wind’s whisper sweet music dances A magical night that will set the spirit free Silently breathes out a puff of magic sweetly beauty enchants warmly etching strikes frosted fingers cracking ice deeply echoes Striking inside bells toll warmly skipping drumbeats bouncing of chamber walls loving tunes Believing in your love a dream Which enchants music of the butterflies dance howling clouds out steaming warm sighs fluttering warmly I closed my eyes at the end of the road and thought of the stars and the reason earth spins around the sun A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne- Lise Andresen :) - 28.12.2014 -

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Date: 1/4/2015 12:28:00 PM
Liam and Anne-Lise, Already commented here on Anne-Lise's original post. Same applies here. A most wonderful write indeed!! Very well-done. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 12/31/2014 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you, this was an excellent choice for poem of the day.
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Date: 12/29/2014 11:35:00 PM
Hello Liam & Anne Lise! This is a very beautiful and romantic poem. Excellent collaboration! Just dazzling! I just love it! Very moved by it. Such magically enchanting love write!So full of love and romance, one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise. Just awesome !You are great poets! A solid 7 for each of you! Your pens are truly golden! I wish you a very Happy New Year to each of you Liam and Anne Lise! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D.
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Date: 12/29/2014 7:20:00 PM
Just beautiful! Really. I loved all the images that appear in your words!
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Date: 12/29/2014 12:39:00 PM
You all are amazing -- words sing and dance -- the wolf cry is my favorite line -- I hear its lonely call and my spirit soars to his music. 7
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Date: 12/29/2014 12:04:00 PM
- Thank you my dear friend, Liam - Always a pleasure !!! - huggs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2014 11:41:00 AM
absolutely outstanding Liam and Anne lise - will give you a 7 too Liam:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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