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A Journey To The Pearly Gates And Back Again

Iris sun fades and so does the day
whispers the carried in the silence of night glowing
Wishes floating on silver trails faraway
The image of your face will forever bounded to this world
Angels Brought you to me made a lightening
sparkling diamonds in the misting treasures gems so bright

Ice roses turns into a steaming jungle of quivering glass
Flashing in the distance, in the moon light
and all of its stars, that's where the angels dancing
A beautiful adventure picture sparklers on a winter night

A cold moon dressed in dark velvet 
with a pearl milky white smile beams 
Sparkling jewel crystal lights up 
stars blinking silver awakening 
warm invading darkness your light 
My life has at last found its light and its hope

Soulful cries a wolf dressed in winter clothes 
faraway over ocean waves 
carries in a wind’s  whisper sweet music dances 
A magical night that will set the spirit free
Silently breathes out a puff of magic sweetly 
beauty enchants warmly etching strikes 
frosted fingers cracking ice deeply echoes 

Striking inside bells toll warmly skipping drumbeats 
bouncing of chamber walls loving tunes 
Believing in your love a dream 
Which enchants music of the butterflies dance 
howling clouds out steaming warm sighs fluttering warmly
I closed my eyes at the end of the road
and thought of the stars 
and the reason earth spins around the sun

  A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and 
  Anne- Lise Andresen :) - 28.12.2014 -

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 1/4/2015 12:28:00 PM
Liam and Anne-Lise, Already commented here on Anne-Lise's original post. Same applies here. A most wonderful write indeed!! Very well-done. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 12/31/2014 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you, this was an excellent choice for poem of the day.
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Date: 12/29/2014 11:35:00 PM
Hello Liam & Anne Lise! This is a very beautiful and romantic poem. Excellent collaboration! Just dazzling! I just love it! Very moved by it. Such magically enchanting love write!So full of love and romance, one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise. Just awesome !You are great poets! A solid 7 for each of you! Your pens are truly golden! I wish you a very Happy New Year to each of you Liam and Anne Lise! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D.
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Date: 12/29/2014 7:20:00 PM
Just beautiful! Really. I loved all the images that appear in your words!
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Date: 12/29/2014 12:39:00 PM
You all are amazing -- words sing and dance -- the wolf cry is my favorite line -- I hear its lonely call and my spirit soars to his music. 7
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Date: 12/29/2014 12:04:00 PM
- Thank you my dear friend, Liam - Always a pleasure !!! - huggs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2014 11:41:00 AM
absolutely outstanding Liam and Anne lise - will give you a 7 too Liam:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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