A Journey To a World of Fantasy

Accompanied by a heavenly choir chant I dance. Shortly divided from the world of silence. I dance and dance, along with other lonely souls. An absolute veneration for the creator of joy and sorrows. Despite the sole of my feet bleeding, I stay careless. And the exquisiteness of the red ornamented flesh. I can feel the insistence of happiness to gain. As for being hypnotized, I ignore the pain. Oh there is life more life in this fantasy. Life that a poet could only manifest in his reverie. Fortunate, grieved, splendid, dreadful. A life that's full.
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June 17, 2013 at 4:27 PM
well crafted entry... You can be sure of one thing...... This will not be the last entry of yours that I read.... Congratulations and hugs are in order.... Jake
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June 17, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Thanks for the kind words, John. I've read some of your poems too and they were lovely..!! will surely giving your page more visits and comments.. ;)
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June 17, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Hi Shirley, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT
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June 17, 2013 at 5:30 PM
Thank you for appreciating my poem, Skat.. Dozen love for you too.. ^_^
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June 10, 2013 at 2:45 PM
I think this is the true definition of life. Embracing all the pros & cons, the strengths & flaws, the good & the bad, yet still waking up with a smile on your face and being able to walk on. Wonderfully put together!
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June 10, 2013 at 7:45 PM
I'm so flattered by your comment, Drake. Kind as always..Many thanks..! *hug* :))
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