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A Journey

Through the woods Through the rivers Crossing miles of way The journey began. Across the trees The thorny roses Bearing fiercy rays of sun The skin burning heat. Sometimes that it was tiring The painful long walks Still there was a hope A shine to be a pearl. Hopes to win Wishes to conquer No fear in heart A will to reach. Rest down for a while When the mind distracted Success is never easy Thats what the heart said. A deed for a good A reason to smile The path that lead Through lots of tests. Its never difficult to move ahead Thats what it taught When the pains and injuries Ended up my journey, where I wished to be.

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Date: 1/6/2017 1:47:00 AM
Superb piece++++++++++ congrats+++
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 1/6/2017 3:10:00 AM
Thnk uu
Date: 4/16/2016 2:02:00 PM
Long journey into night.Congrat Gong-rate.
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 1/6/2017 3:10:00 AM
Thank u
Date: 4/3/2016 12:58:00 PM
Brilliant piece. I enjoyed.....
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 4/4/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thanks...
Date: 3/27/2016 10:32:00 AM
Prat, this is a wonderful write, full of hope and determination, I am loving it 7 and welcome to poetrysoup, hope you enjoy this journey ~
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/27/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you soooo much...
Date: 3/26/2016 10:57:00 PM
Awesome narration my friend. .I was expecting happy ending though....Nevertheless, you scored high as you honestly n effectively expressed what your heart felt....
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 11:19:00 PM
Thank you... Its a happy ending only... Because, the journey ended up at the destination only...
Date: 3/25/2016 1:48:00 PM
This is a wonderful write... great ending, Pratidhwani... Linda
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/25/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thank uu soo much...

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