A Journey

I started out believing there was but 
one church which had the truth, and only one.
However, I felt always in a rut.
By mid-life – with religion I was done.
Too many ideologies exist!
It makes no sense, for all cannot be true.
There’s one thing that I feel can’t be dismissed -
there is a “Someone” who loves me and you
all equally. I see Him and I feel
Him in earth’s beauty and the souls of those
who do good works. I know that He is real.
The orderliness of creation shows
a Master is behind it all! I know
one day in death, my soul will homeward go.


Jan. 8, 2021 
 Unseeking Seeker's "My Spiritual Journey" Poetry Contest (NA)
For Brian Strand's 'ALL YOURS' Poetry Contest 
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Levasseur Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:30 AM
There is indeed a master of the grand show we call life. Well executed.
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Thanks. And how it can be denied is beyond my comprehension!
Leffanta Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:55 AM
It does not take much experience of life to realise there is a greater power unseen' those who use it to do some good generally enjoy an happier life than those who use it to some advantage. Good luck in this event! Aloha! Rico
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:50 AM
for sure!
Theraven Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Andrea, You've done well on your Journey, so far. "Well begun is half done." -Aristotle
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:49 AM
and there's that other quote about something paved with good intentions. hahaha
Jayasankar Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 2:23 AM
I could TRULY understand your mind Andrea. This is straight from the heart and yes, it's true that we all believe in some kind of 'Soul' from 'Above', that loves us all EQUALLY.. Now, ..after reading yours, I really donno what to write for this...Most of the things I wish to convey for this contest, you have already written. Still, I'll try to put it in a different way.. GREAT spiritual journey.... Hugs ~ Ani
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Thanks. Let me go see if you wrote one about your own journey!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 1:23 AM
You are on the right path to Heaven. ~~
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:48 AM
thanks, Victor. I often do not feel that way. I just kind of flutter along.
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