A Jar For My Soul

glass wall,
hides no fear,
twisted lid,
holds me here,
lost inside,
a crystal cage,
collecting dust,
along with age,
broken wings,
so my fears,
in this jar,
i hide my tears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Singe Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 11:04 AM
write
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 3:34 AM
Congratulations Jezabekelle x
Brown Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest jezabelle. Love, Carol
Minardi Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations on this winning poem. Enjoyed it :)
Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 12:27 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Good wording and rhyming here.
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 7:37 PM
this is a very special poem. I really like it, Jezabella. Congratulations on your win.
Williams Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Jezabella congrats on your win,..David
Sweetheart Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:31 PM
conngrats jezabella on a top ten win for a wonderful write on jars theme luv..
Quigley Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:04 PM
A totally different take then the norm. Well done and congratulations Jezabella
Davis Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:12 AM
I rather like the concept here...nice one! :-)
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