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A January Night

Frost feathers pattern
the windowpane in this room.
a cold night ahead.

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Sara Kendrick

February 3, 2011 at 9:31 AM

I can feel the chill..Good descriptiveness...Started raining cold rain here..At first drip drip onto the birdbath..Then lots of drips..Very cold rain...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2011 at 8:41 PM

wow, this is so pretty, Carol. Glad you enjoyed my 55. I have put it in two contests so far and still have got NOTHING with it. hahaha. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 18, 2011 at 7:24 AM

Very nice haiku with nice images, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 18, 2011 at 5:12 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Carol. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol