A House Too Clean

A House Too Clean

By Elton Camp

A dirty house Aunt Suzy couldn’t stand
She always had a cleaning rag in her hand

Her furniture was spotless and had a shine
Windows were washed and looked so fine

Kitchen you’d think no meal had ever seen
The bathrooms were ever sparkling clean

A cluttered closet was, to her, a disgrace
In her storage, everything had its place

Household chores she did early to late
To walk on her floors people did hate

After a long, clean life Suzy passed away
And this is what her tombstone did say

“Good Aunt Suzy lived for many a year
Dust on the piano was her greatest fear.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 5, 2011 at 8:27 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Elton. Love, Carol
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