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A hour lost

A hour is lost tucked inside a dark vase, gone creamer drowned coffee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/17/2019 9:53:00 PM
Awesome haiku! :) Loved it. The last line is great as well as the other two lines. Great job overall! -JWE
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 5/17/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you! Hope you had a great Friday! :)
Date: 3/10/2019 9:44:00 PM
Nancy, brevity has never looked any more delightful in poetry form.
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 3/11/2019 9:14:00 AM
I didn't have enough time to begin with and now I have even less! lol