A Hour Lost

A hour is lost
tucked inside a dark vase, gone
creamer drowned coffee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Breidenthal Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Awesome haiku! :) Loved it. The last line is great as well as the other two lines. Great job overall! -JWE
Beckman  Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Thank you! Hope you had a great Friday! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 9:44 PM
Nancy, brevity has never looked any more delightful in poetry form.
Beckman  Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 9:14 AM
I didn't have enough time to begin with and now I have even less! lol
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