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A Hot Day

A roof will cool you down
A cold drink too
A fan too
An aircond. too 
A state of tolerance too 
A state of patience too
And a state of calmness of the mind
Will some more cool you down
But strong desires and greeds will never do
They will turn you to ashes
Even on an icy-cold day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/3/2021 1:05:00 AM
There are many a wise words here Sai. I like the transition from physical gadgets to our own mindset within. Cheers - Gary
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Sai Lin Lip
Date: 10/3/2021 4:08:00 AM
Thanks.

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