A Hostile Attitude

I used to wear a white cowboy's hat,
but here in New York folks gave me funny looks for my choice.
" You must have a real cowboy's grit!"
" Go down Texas and learn that accent with a high-pitched voice!"
" Were they really so insensitive to insult my intelligence?" 


Stubborn as I was, their comments fell on my deaf ear,
and as they got closer...I greeted them as a true gentleman would;
oh, they showed no sympathy through a gaze of fear!
" Did I resemble an outlaw or appeared to them too shady and cold?"
" Did they redicule me for wearing a cowboy's hat that was too broad?


" Non sense!" I said with a tone of a rebel wanting to start a fight...
"Cowboys have always been my favorite heroes of the Wild West!"
" Who dared to say to William Picket or Charles Goonight...
that their hats were too wide to suggest an imminent threat?"
"Keep your mouth shut, don't look if you don't like my hat!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/9/2011 10:53:00 PM
great work here , andrew.. super CONGRATS! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/9/2011 6:53:00 PM
So cool to see you in the top 10 Andrew. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honered 9th Place! Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/9/2011 11:27:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your well deserved win in the contest--kashinath
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your super win in the bonnet contest ..with this extraordinary entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv and happy weekend too..my friend..
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:16:00 PM
Oh, this has such a feisty tone to it, Andrew. I always think of you as an angel, so maybe you should be wearing a halo instead of a cowboy hat. Congratulations on your success in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/8/2011 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Andrew. The poems were all so good was hard to judge. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2011 7:48:00 AM
Well, this girl likes guys in those cowboy hats, so keep it on . . . well I just like cowboys... I enjoyed your poem, Andrew~~
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