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Dusk was growing into the night. She moaned in pain and boredom. She looked upwards towards the window. Seemed dirty, she thought. Headstrong, she turned on her side. In a sitting position, she clutched the rod Which supplied her with some drip. Nausea gripped her, like seasickness. She rested for a while but soon She gripped the rod and stood up. She felt tired but was as always headstrong. Slowly she plodded towards the window. How beautiful were the stars shining afar! Still, dizziness took hold of her Till she fell unconscious on the floor Though she smiled in happiness. Two nurses realised something was wrong And came into the hospital room. They lifted her up onto the bed Covered with thick blankets. Doctor’s care was immediate Finally, she recovered touch and go. Yet they were all surprised as she still looked Smiling at the window displaying stars.

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Date: 2/9/2024 1:19:00 AM
As we search those twinkling stars every night, it gives us yet another reason to live for another day. A great write dear Victor....Hugs
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Date: 1/25/2024 9:27:00 PM
Faith. I look at the night sky and say thank you, Lord.. Nice write, my friend. Hugs and lots of love
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Date: 1/24/2024 9:22:00 AM
Stunning Victor. I'm still smiling with her gazing at the stars. :)
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Date: 1/24/2024 4:30:00 AM
Love your narration! A woman in the grips of hospital boredom but she manages to get up, make it to the window and see the stars! She saw stars as she went down too, but the recollection of life outside her hospital room made her smile. God bless you always, my friend!
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Date: 1/24/2024 3:33:00 AM
People who are confined to hospital beds feel terribly bored ! A sight of the open blue sky and the beautiful stars shining there pumps energy into tired brain ! You have described this scene as if you have witnessed the whole scene!
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Date: 1/24/2024 3:28:00 AM
At least she was in the best place with help close at hand when she took a tumble. Tom
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Date: 1/23/2024 5:01:00 PM
Well done, Victor. A gripping tale that took me by surprise at the outcome.
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Date: 1/22/2024 10:31:00 PM
I'm with Andrea, I'm sure that she knows something divine is coming for her. She stays and awaits with a blissful smile on her face. I enjoyed, Victor! hugs
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Date: 1/22/2024 3:12:00 PM
Very nice, Victor. I was expecting the worse but was happily surprised by the outcome.
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Date: 1/22/2024 2:15:00 PM
This tale is so intriguing, and conveys the real drama of being seriously ill, in a hospital. I love the joy and hope of her vision of the enduring stars, and the happy ending of her recovery. :)
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Date: 1/22/2024 12:42:00 PM
Nicely written Victor..
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Date: 1/22/2024 10:09:00 AM
Ahhh she sees something coming and it will be glorious
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Date: 1/22/2024 8:53:00 AM
Good ending. She survived. Perhaps she saw a lucky meteor shower amongst the stars. Your poem brought the reader to the harsh realities of hospitals. I'd rather read them than be in them.
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Date: 1/22/2024 8:49:00 AM
a well crafted story line, Victor. Loved her resilient spirt...still smiling at the window displaying starts. Inspirational and uplifting this morning. Enjoy your day, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/22/2024 7:08:00 AM
so touching poem, i spend one week in 2018, now i flee when i can, health is a treasure, thanks poet
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Date: 1/22/2024 6:57:00 AM
Beautiful write so well delivered dear victor and i love the the storyline and what it conveys here, how one could still see stars and light amidst all that around is very well depicted here. Inspiring and the flow of this is brilliant! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light
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Date: 1/22/2024 6:47:00 AM
Quite imaginative, well-designed, and an excellent poem. A view of starry heavens made her happy.
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Date: 1/22/2024 6:03:00 AM
Glad she is all right--such comfort outside the window when you are sick in bed. Well written, as always.
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Date: 1/22/2024 4:49:00 AM
Starry skies brought her smiles, Very nicely expressed
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Date: 1/22/2024 4:24:00 AM
Reaching for the stars that most people don't understand. Very touching work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/22/2024 3:00:00 AM
- A lovely story, Victor - With strength and love :) - hugs
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Date: 1/22/2024 2:00:00 AM
Stars are a blessing, a shimmering gift more beautiful and more valuable than diamonds. Love this Victor. God bless you, love, Gina
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