A Horse In My Reading Room

A horse in my reading room at my study table from my very childhood days, galloping as if never to stop, perhaps the fastest and oldest horse of the world. Its shiny black skin reflects the sky. Its beauty is like that of a sleek poem rhyming down the page dancing merrily, or an arrow zooming past everything leaving a trail of invisible impression in the air to reach its target. The horse definitely has a target. My father knew it, as he sketched it for me. He used to say frequently, "Life is motion with a target". To him the horse was the symbol of life. Twelve years have passed since my father's death, the horse is still galloping.... perhaps it knows its target.... but I am still looking for mine.... **My late father had the God gifted ability to sketch and paint like an artist.A true story. © kashinath karmakar (15th June 2011) ============================== Placement : 6th (June 2011) Contest:A Horse Story Sponsor:Carol Brown
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Brown Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Picture Frame~moment" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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December 22, 2011 at 1:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed it x
Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Kashinath, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Phookan Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 1:51 PM
Congrrats on your fabulous win in this contest with this excellent piece from you Kashi... gautami
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:19 PM
I am glad to see this one here to congratulate today. It remains one of my favorites in the contest. It is very deep and meaningful. Luv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:12 PM
He was an artist as are you with words, light & Love and congrad's
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Congrats on your win, Kash. Great story. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
Horne Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Many congrats on your win, Kash : )
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 1:40 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Congrats Kash on your super six spot in the horse contest with this exciting entry ..beautifully penned.. excellently told luv..enjoy..
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 6:38 PM
simply brilliant Kash.. adventuresome story and wonderfully written .. I luv horses.. and a great footnote for your Father my friend.. good luck in the contest with this stunning piece luv..
Horne Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Lovely nostalgic write, Kash : )
Onclaud Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 5:35 AM
so alive in descriptions and images of a horse that " lives" through your eyes and your dad's, kashi... a creative shift worth a win! whoo! ;) huggs!
K. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 12:55 AM
What a very wonderful take on the topic of horses, Kashinath and how cool that your father used the horse as a symbol of life, really liked his philosophy too! My dad also can sketch really well, I envy that about him, haha!
Poet Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 12:24 AM
Yes Andrea this one is for Carol's contest.
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 9:12 PM
This is beautiful and how you related it to your dad and to your own life, Kash. Wow, one of your best. I am not sure maybe in other countries, but we spell it "galloping" WRITE on!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Is it for horse contest?
Falotico Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Beautiful expressions of love and loss in this Gem... very good my friend...
Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Many of us are still looking for our targets, Kash. This horse your father sketched for you has special meaning. Beautifully written. Best wishes in Carol's Horse Poem contest. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 4:07 AM
Enjoyed reading your true story this morn..I am glad that you had the great relationship with your father..That is what the world needs today..Thanks for stopping by my work about the Bilberry Kiss..Sara
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June 15, 2011 at 3:45 AM
A wonderful, creative piece, with equally wonderful allegory and imagery! "Life is motion with a target" is a profound and poetic statement! Nicely written poem.
Poet Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 3:27 AM
A horse sketched by my late father.
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