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A Hollow Shell

a hollow shell of tangled synapses sparked into gradual madness which drowns out the truths of the day as the mind reeks of the rotten sad moments that swirl in the rancid soup of forgotten dreams dreams that once traced a gentle path of innocence dreams that reached for pure love’s tender touch dreams now paralysed but once vivaciously alive what became of those fresh dreams and hopes as they lie mustily on dusty bookshelves torn into shreds by time’s fine scimitar devoid of the touch of raw passion when all that remains of love is a hollow shell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/8/2013 11:15:00 PM
WOW! Good write! I liked how you came back full circle to your original line...in between you used some very descriptive words that created real imagines. Enjoyed this..........BTW....love the name you go by...very enchanting
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Date: 3/9/2013 4:37:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen! I am touched by your generous words. Stay well and have a kind, peaceful, and a gentle day :-)

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