Panagiota Romios Poet Concrete

A Hip, Square Feline

AAA       AAA
                        @           @
                       
                        meow meow
                             
                     being           honey 
                       nice            your 
                           soft and yes



Oh, good heavens. Panagiota tries a concrete poem. Good grief!!
Hope you get a charge out of my zaniness! -)) Just learning!

Panagiota 

5/18/2019
4:45 a.m.

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Line Gauthier May 18, 2019 at 4:51 PM Valiant effort, Panagiota. Don't take this the wrong way but... maybe add a tail to your cat so it looks less like an owl... Either way I'll like it. LOL Panagiota Romios May 18, 2019 at 5:10 PM Sorry Line.appreciate your suggestion. How could I forget a tail! I don't know. Maybe he is owl-cat combo? Tail later...need to rest Poet eyes, Honesty welcomed here. Gratefully, Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger May 18, 2019 at 1:17 PM Panagiota, this is GREAT. My first one I had to re-type about eight hundred times, and I finally did not post it at all. I have learned now, do not type it into any other program. Type it directly into the PS box. You knew this somehow. Nice little kitty! Panagiota Romios May 18, 2019 at 2:02 PM Goodness. 800 times? I typed it onto the iPad Notebook first, then pasted it. Go figure! Looks like Santa -)). But that's my first attempt. Remember the first time you ice skated? That's what is was like for me. Wobbles! Panagiota...live dangerously always! ^: ^

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2019 at 12:34 PM It looks about like my own efforts with this crazy form. Meow!! Panagiota Romios May 18, 2019 at 1:01 PM Hugs to you Andrea. He looks like Santa Claus as I told William. ROFLMAO.. Glad to know others have hassled with that form. Wiki how has suggestions on how to construct a concrete poem. Obviously, I did not use it, Meows, PanagiotA

Ralph Sergi May 18, 2019 at 10:16 AM Go for it, Pangiota! Panagiota Romios May 18, 2019 at 12:27 PM Good morning Ralph! Yes, I will go for it. You know it was a relief as always, to just be naked, so to speak, with my work. You reminded me to not give up. Do not worry...I never fold. Thank you. Panagiota. Nice to meet you.On my follow list! Want to see your work. Panagiota

William Kelii Kekaula May 18, 2019 at 8:36 AM Must be wagging its tongue, methinks Panagiota, Aloha wk Panagiota Romios May 18, 2019 at 12:18 PM Look at it again..,looks more like Santa Claus with a beard? LOL! Perchance, a toothless, aged cat with no teeth? Your gorgeous concrete poem was my inspiration for this. I have a long way to go. But that's OK. I was not born a poet.)). I credit you with a gold star for responding to my first try. Stii makes me Laugh, PR you are a kind poet. Thank you!