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A Hip, Square Feline

AAA AAA @ @ meow meow being honey nice your soft and yes Oh, good heavens. Panagiota tries a concrete poem. Good grief!! Hope you get a charge out of my zaniness! -)) Just learning! Panagiota 5/18/2019 4:45 a.m.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/18/2019 4:51:00 PM

Valiant effort, Panagiota. Don't take this the wrong way but... maybe add a tail to your cat so it looks less like an owl... Either way I'll like it. LOL

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/18/2019 5:10:00 PM

Sorry Line.appreciate your suggestion. How could I forget a tail! I don't know. Maybe he is owl-cat combo? Tail later...need to rest Poet eyes, Honesty welcomed here. Gratefully, Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/18/2019 1:17:00 PM

Panagiota, this is GREAT. My first one I had to re-type about eight hundred times, and I finally did not post it at all. I have learned now, do not type it into any other program. Type it directly into the PS box. You knew this somehow. Nice little kitty!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/18/2019 2:02:00 PM

Goodness. 800 times? I typed it onto the iPad Notebook first, then pasted it. Go figure! Looks like Santa -)). But that's my first attempt. Remember the first time you ice skated? That's what is was like for me. Wobbles! Panagiota...live dangerously always! ^: ^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2019 12:34:00 PM

It looks about like my own efforts with this crazy form. Meow!!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/18/2019 1:01:00 PM

Hugs to you Andrea. He looks like Santa Claus as I told William. ROFLMAO.. Glad to know others have hassled with that form. Wiki how has suggestions on how to construct a concrete poem. Obviously, I did not use it, Meows, PanagiotA

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/18/2019 10:16:00 AM

Go for it, Pangiota!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/18/2019 12:27:00 PM

Good morning Ralph! Yes, I will go for it. You know it was a relief as always, to just be naked, so to speak, with my work. You reminded me to not give up. Do not worry...I never fold. Thank you. Panagiota. Nice to meet you.On my follow list! Want to see your work. Panagiota

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/18/2019 8:36:00 AM

Must be wagging its tongue, methinks Panagiota, Aloha wk

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/18/2019 12:18:00 PM

Look at it again..,looks more like Santa Claus with a beard? LOL! Perchance, a toothless, aged cat with no teeth? Your gorgeous concrete poem was my inspiration for this. I have a long way to go. But that's OK. I was not born a poet.)). I credit you with a gold star for responding to my first try. Stii makes me Laugh, PR you are a kind poet. Thank you!