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A Hint of Red and Yellow

A hint of red and yellow Amongst a sea of green A sign that change is coming To the forest canopies This morn's air is slightly chilled Much more than in past months And squirrels scurry 'cross the ground Collecting all their nuts There are no children playing Nor in the swimming pools The streets are calm and quiet For they've all gone back to school Some have dug out their hoodies And others long sleeve shirts And some have traded off their shorts For Pants and longer skirts The corn too, has turned colors From green to wilted brown And bonfires are blossoming Like ember flowers from the ground Ciders and hot chocolate And flavors of pumpkin spice And the beers at Oktoberfest Well, they Taste just as nice The full moon rises larger Signs of harvest in the air And the deer become skittish With bow season drawing near The sky itself seems different It's shades of grey and blue And the sun that hides behind the clouds Tells us fall will be here soon

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Date: 1/13/2018 9:43:00 AM
congrats on your win Justin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2018 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Justin.
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Date: 10/9/2017 8:09:00 PM
You write perfect poems
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Justin Clason
Date: 10/9/2017 9:59:00 PM
Best comment ever! Thank you!
Date: 9/10/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you for this poem. It abounds with word pictures and the rhyme scheme pleases my ears. I really like "the deer become skittish With bow season drawing near". Thanks again.................peace!
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Justin Clason
Date: 9/12/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Richard, that's very kind of you to say.
Date: 9/7/2017 7:32:00 PM
Hi Justin, I love the Fall and I love your poem with its excellent imagery and autumn content so well written. I especially liked your line; 'and bonfires are blossoming like ember flowers from the ground'... That is just beautiful poetic bliss to me! Totally enjoyed and congrats on your win! :)
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Justin Clason
Date: 9/7/2017 8:46:00 PM
Thanks Susan, fall is my favorite time of year too. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 9/2/2017 9:19:00 AM
Congrats, Justin!
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