A Hiku Set Free

thoughts once nesting

        like birdlings in my mind . . .

                                   poems set free
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Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 10:56 AM
A message to those with ideas to set them free! Nice Andrea. :)
Famuyiwa Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 7:15 PM
Good concept. Good write. Congrats.
Maverick Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 9:44 PM
I am out with a net.' Lol i just can't have all these Poems fluttering about like this Andrea.' Do you Realalise how prolific you are.? Its like snowstorm by now.!! Tut tut.))) Mind you this One flies.quite.. well huff..Puff swipe..No can't Get it!! Well done btw.) All the best..!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 4:40 AM
Back with congrats!
Rolland Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 9:42 AM
so lovely, nice inspiration indeed, so fluid thanks poet
Hind Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Lovely! :)
Tor Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Great metaphor Andrea. Clever and wonderful to read. Your words inspire in this lovely Poem of yours. Hugs Dear writer...
Thomas Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 7:49 AM
I like this Andie... I remember that feeling, like they were a part of me. Really nice
Famuyiwa Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 2:04 AM
Nicely penned and congrats on your wining placement.
Singh Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 11:20 PM
Sense of growth and developement and liberation.Very nice.
Martin Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 8:09 PM
Sweet like you, Andrea. I'm humbled, as usual by your poetic gifts. Kudos
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 2:57 PM
Thanks. You are so nice
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Great!
Bauer Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 1:09 PM
this is lovely, andrea!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:00 AM
What a creative write you have here.. Yes, set the poems free for us to read... Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 5:49 AM
Yes, enjoyed. We sit and ponder… a poet sees, mulls over, sets fire to paper! Hugs
Mckeithan Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 2:26 AM
Wonderful write. Like the comparison of thoughts birds.
Empress Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 1:28 AM
I love the last line the most; “ poems set free” what a stunning hiku! And how yours flow and arrangement of lines truly is impressive! Brilliant! Best wishes sweet andrea for the contest, loved reading this
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 1:22 AM
- Creative and great, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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