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A Highland Limerick

The once was a man from faraway
who held life in his hand as the pen did sway
With ink on the page, He left us a daze
And all the the ladies did swoon away!


The Limerick Game..James Fraser has been tagged!!!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/7/2009 5:37:00 AM

Let's see someone else write one in a dialect? Comon Rasta Man?? Light & Love

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/7/2009 4:15:00 AM

Love that Limerick and like the style of Limericks. Well done, Deborah. Love, Gert

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/31/2009 9:16:00 PM

Witty, Ms. Guzzi. I feel that you have entered a game of back and forth. Good luck! As you can see, I redid my contest entry and my entire poem, based on your shrewd and perceptive deductions of my first attempt. I thought about your soup mail and I realized that you were more right than I knew. Thank you. I hope that I did not violate any unwritten rule( sic) about entering a contest doing this. If I did, I'm sorry. I hope that you approvevof the new version. regards, Gerard.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/31/2009 12:05:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your excellent Limerick today.I enjoyed it Deborah. I wish to thank you for all you kind comments. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 7/30/2009 9:55:00 AM

Deborah,...great Limerick ! You have a wonderful way with words my poetic friend,..and I want to truly thank you for your kind help with my poetry that you corrected me with ! How kind and conciderate for you to take the time and encourage me ,..and you were so right and I'm happy you did so,..I have made some changes and hope you are happy with the changes ! Kindly, james