A High Cliff

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I climbed a high cliff seeking spiritual guidance for it is the culture of my native people to look to the Eagle the master of the skies the one who flies the highest and the closest to the creator so, I looked up to Father Sky and prayed then, I heard the Eagle calling me and down came a feather into my open hands it is said that an Eagle feather is never taken but always given and is a deeply spiritual gift now, I do not fear the shadows and I am free, strong, and proud ______________________________ September 19, 2020 Written for the contest, COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (13) sponsor, Brian Strand

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Arturo Michael

Date: 9/20/2020 5:11:00 PM

Only the fear of fear to fear...Nice message in your write...

Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2020 8:53:00 AM

Arturo, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment _Constance

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2020 11:07:00 PM

Great eulogy to the Eagle, the symbol of USA. ~~

Constance La France
Date: 9/20/2020 7:37:00 AM

Victor, thank you for the visit and comment, appreciate _Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/19/2020 5:04:00 PM

I am so appreciative of your write, Constance (yes - Constance!) I am so proud of my native American heritage among my many other heritages. The eagle is a great symbol and we also fly on the wings of an eagle in the Psalms. Great layering of metaphor! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you an eagle feather!

Constance La France
Date: 9/20/2020 7:37:00 AM

Sam, thank you so much for the great comment _Constance