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A Hidden Love

Her indifference was merely a facade
Tears fell inside with each shovel of sod
They buried him on a sunny Spring day
She stared at the hole in an offhand way

There was no stopping the rush of the past
That flowed through her head from first to the last
She'd been a child as he first lived next door
Her love was hidden - she learned to adore

He was some older but she loved him still
Knowing that with time all the gap would fill
She hadn't counted on a foreign war
Her true love was drafted and sent afar

They sent him away with a hero's tag
And welcomed him home in a body bag
She stood in silence and prayed to her God
Her indifference was merely a facade


August, 2016
For contest Camouflage Me A Poem
Rhyme scheme  AABB,CCDD,EEFF,GGHH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/12/2016 11:17:00 PM
Larry, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem ~
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Date: 8/11/2016 8:59:00 AM
Hi Larry, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/11/2016 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!...Larry
Date: 8/6/2016 6:08:00 AM
Well written and touching ...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/7/2016 10:01:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words...LArry

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