A Hidden Cost

I fled to the city scared and unsure, with no money, no prospects of a job. And swept up by the rising human tide, I proved myself foolish and immature. I felt homesick, and looking for a cure, I threw myself into big city life. But finding friends was not an easy task: my trust in folks was often premature. The neon lights flaunt fantasy's allure: yet, reality soon burst that bubble. There's a price for being young and naïve; a hidden cost: that all youth must endure. Eating whatever food I could procure: Necessity taught me to beg and steal by convincing me: my motives were pure.
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April 3, 2020 at 11:16 AM
Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win..
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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March 8, 2020 at 7:37 PM
Living on whatever I could procure/ necessity taught me to steal and rob/ while assuring me my motives were pure./ It is a distortion of truth, either insidious, or from outside. What is truth, what is beauty, needs no persuasive influence or sedation. We assassinate poetry to craft our own definition, exactly like imposing a stain mark on a white piece of cloth and blame poetry for that. Poetry is just a medium of art, the rest depends on us.
Pinet Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Thanks Tamanna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Turner Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Reads like you might have some experience on the subject, Emile. You did very well with the prompt. Good luck.
Pinet Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Daniel, you write what you know... I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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