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A hidden angel

A hidden angel trapped in a cube of ice She seeks to unravel her desire for life The sun she desires to free her from the peril That her hidden temptation has brought as a gift In the summer she had A most beautiful moment With a person she's met In a wonderful day The shadow of lust with a grin lights her heart In this cage of loneliness where her feelings start to melt She wants to get back, she wants to find him But the truth is she can't for she'll forever be hid Feeling loss and regret she starts to succumb To the anchor of feeling she once had in her palm The flower received in a moment of love Her palm is now wet with the drop of the lone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 2/7/2016 10:47:00 AM
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:31:00 PM
Hello, Bogdan-Ioan Vaida Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ... SKAT
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:31:00 PM
Boqdan, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 3/20/2009 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Tyesha
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Date: 3/19/2009 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the featuring of your poem, "A Hidden Angel." Vince
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week! Beautiful! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/15/2009 1:45:00 PM
Interesting imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured! I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/15/2009 12:26:00 PM
Very poignant story here, Vaida and well written! Congratulations on your writing being selected to be featured here at the Soup!!
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