A Hidden Angel

A hidden angel trapped in a cube of ice
She seeks to unravel her desire for life 
The sun she desires to free her from the peril
That her hidden temptation has brought as a gift

In the summer she had
A most beautiful moment
With a person she's met
In a wonderful day

The shadow of lust with a grin lights her heart
In this cage of loneliness where her feelings start to melt
She wants to get back, she wants to find him
But the truth is she can't for she'll forever be hid

Feeling loss and regret she starts to succumb
To the anchor of feeling she once had in her palm
The flower received in a moment of love
Her palm is now wet with the drop of the lone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 2/7/2016 10:47:00 AM
THIS IS DEEP
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:31:00 PM
Hello, Bogdan-Ioan Vaida Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ... SKAT
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:31:00 PM
Boqdan, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 3/20/2009 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Tyesha
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Date: 3/19/2009 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the featuring of your poem, "A Hidden Angel." Vince
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week! Beautiful! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/15/2009 1:45:00 PM
Interesting imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured! I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/15/2009 12:26:00 PM
Very poignant story here, Vaida and well written! Congratulations on your writing being selected to be featured here at the Soup!!
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