A Hero For You

If there's a chance, Can we have this dance? I will take a life's race, will you come with me to face? Tears flowered to my eyes, save my soul, will you do? Don't tremble or fumble, as I touch your lips Yet express joy, as I joke and play on gyst Hero, that I want to be for you Crashing all your hurts and pains Be by your side, forever be Vowing to be only yours, Only yours... But would you consider me? Will you take me as well? A lie Never ever will you tell "Only us", that you will swear? by olive_eloi 1:38 pm 03/18/2014 ----------------------- "Supernatural power we humans don't possess, yet with our own way we can be heroes even for a day.... " by olive_eloi

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Justin Bordner

Date: 3/26/2014 8:35:00 PM

"Crashing all your hurts and pains..." the closing verse is enigmatic, just the way I like my love to be! I like to be a hero at least once a week, but we all must become heros to ourselves before being heroic for others. This is my feeling. Thank for provoking my thought. Xool write. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/27/2014 5:37:00 AM

:) thank you.. :) yes we should be heroes for ownselves first... that means facing each life battle with bravery and love.. :) thanks for the visit :D to God be the glory :)

Leon Enriquez

Date: 3/22/2014 10:53:00 PM

Dear Olive: The hero will come. A touching write. Leon